You are the most dreaded of all spiritual sages.
The doom-bringer of all ages.
Incorruptible and obedient servant.
Unhesitant even for a moment.
Heed my word my new found friend.
Wipe out my every fiend:
Only wait for my word
Before you draw your sword!
Although I know this today
That on some fateful day
You shall break this friendship,
I will abide till you take me to the next Fellowship.
12 comments:
where have u gone? i think ur poetry is beautiful. it has developed really well from what it started out as if i remember correctly when u showed me the first one.
chijoke....i once knew a chijoke eze... :P
You write nice poetry.
Ever thought of publishing?
Teediva: thanx for the props. i won't let u down.
Pammy: that chijioke and I are childhood friends. would try to hook u up if u don't mind.
Princess: thanx for the compliment. I tried once but i just boned it like that. I might revisit it in the future.
nice poem. first time here.
very dark....
*sighs deeply*, this poem e get as e be o, friendship with death ke?
on a serious note, it's a deep poem, nice style.
first time here. Sad that you haven't updated in a while. You really should
Take care!
I liked it, It was dark but the words you wrote painted out pictures for me, I loved it
"Heed my word my new found friend.
Wipe out my every fiend"
Please, please update
@Uzezi: thanks a lot. U should come by more often. I will update soon.
@Afro: yeah. I agree. Am bringing light soon.
@Smaragd: Thanks for the compliment but we all may just need that 'friendship.' e fit just happun!
@Solomonsydelle: I will update really soon. thanks for stopping by.
@Zena: thanks for the excitement. I 'll update pretty soon.
dark...beautiful!
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